Down to the Wire
And we're still fixing little things in my MS. One scene had to be completely reworked because of a certain BDSM element that crossed a line. *sigh* I knew I was pushing it. Strangely enough though, no one ever questions the psychological games that are going on, and yet that can be more harmful than physical pain. Interesting. |
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Are you going to share what the scene was?
7:43 PM
Well, if you've read the book...
There's a scene where Hector washes Sam's mouth out with soap. In the original, before he does that, there'a bit of watersports, to put it delicately.
7:55 AM
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